There are more and more situations using credit cards instead of cash. It seems that cashless society is becoming a reality. How realistic do you think it is? And do you think it brings benefits or problems?
Recently, using more and more credit cards instead of cash has sparked heated debate among individuals. There is a School of thought that using credit cards is good in place of using cash, whereas there are those who maintain a contradict view. However, it does not seem unreasonable to suggest that cashless society is becoming a reality. In this essay, I will elaborate both positive and negative sides with clear examples and thus lead to a plausible conclusion.
To commence with, there are myriad of reasons why using credit cards is good over using a cash, are as follows. At the heart of this matter is that facilitate the anti-money laundering development. To be more precise, that can be increase the purchasing process efficiency. Another major contributing factor of course, is that limit the tax evasion behaviour.
Nevertheless, there are pitfalls that negate with this argument and that can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of cashless society, still the most alarming one rooted to the fact that encourage cyber crime and the internet fraud. Moreover, protecting system is vulnerable.
To put it in a nutshell, I pen down saying that as per aforementioned arguments, benefits of cashless society far outweigh its drawbacks and thus they are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, thus, whereas, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1095.0 1207.87684729 91% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18957345972 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80385331381 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635071090047 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 379.143842365 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1333319242 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5454545455 104.977214359 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1818181818 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230845548787 0.242375264174 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771562551985 0.0925447433944 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0857097752203 0.071462118173 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113717110107 0.151781067708 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0953512627659 0.0609392437508 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.