A friend who lives in a different city has invited you to his/her daughter's 8th birthday. However, you can not accept the invitation due to some personal reasons.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
• thank him for the invitation
• mention why you can not attend the birthday party
• offer to meet him some other day
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ............,
Dear Simon,
I hope you’re well. I am afraid, I have a bit of bad news related to the invitation which I received for Maria’s 8th birthday celebration on 28th August.
I really appreciate for sending birthday invitation, but unfortunately something has come up and I’m not going to be able to make it.
So, what’s my excuse? Well, recently I got promoted as a Head of the department in our organization and my company wants me to visit head office for a month, which is located at London for audit purpose.
On a more positive note, it’s my birthday in October and I’m planning to have a small celebration with family and friends. I’ll will be cooking a meal and you with entire family are invited to join the party.
Sorry about last minute changes, but I hope to see you at my birthday party !
Best regards,
Tim
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...birthday celebration on 28th August. I really appreciate for sending birthday ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 32.9175257732 58% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 722.0 937.175257732 77% => OK
No of words: 149.0 206.0 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84563758389 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49378814695 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85084003215 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691275167785 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 224.1 290.88556701 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.4214970939 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.25 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 4.34317383033 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125219120164 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0574992528924 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423491904844 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723702647921 0.12726935374 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408399667682 0.0580467560999 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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