Everybody should donate a fixed amount of their income to support charity. How far do you share this viewpoint?
One of the most polemical topics in the world is the issue of donation. It is argued that each capable person should contribute a distinct amount of his or her salary to provide help to others. It seems to me that the issue of donation should be voluntary work, not an obligation. This essay deals with the reasons for voluntary donation and gives a concluding viewpoint.
First of all, it is widely accepted fact that individuals work to earn money and boost their financial status, which directly leads to a high quality of life. Therefore, how spending total incomes is a private issue even if someone belongs to an affluent family. Secondly, not all members of society are capable of donation. By this, I mean that a wide range of people are tackling financial problems and they have to pay for various bills such as gas, telephone, and insurance. In this case, by allocating a fixed amount of the income on the donating process, they might encounter with other hardships and challenges. Finally, admittedly, charities need supports of ordinary people; nevertheless, these supports should not perhaps be a mandatory duty because many will consider this as an unpleasant activity and will not be contented.
While it might be correct that a constant amount of money by community members will benefit charity organs and might resolve divers problems such as poverty around the world, it still appears to be the case, however, that for average ordinary people who dealing with daily life troubles, merits of this work outweighed by the drawbacks.
It is logical to conclude that the financial assistance might appear to be voluntary, not compulsory to satisfy both sides.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 124, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., not compulsory to satisfy both sides.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, while, i mean, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99285714286 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65225164257 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5922784385 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18591606616 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630899106582 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565212263264 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0921444527785 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0751585291972 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.46 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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