some people consider price as most important thing to think about when buying product (such as cell phone) or service (eg medical treatment). Do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, some of the individuals prefer to buy any product (or) service by seeing the cost of them.
Firstly, In my point of view, everyone should check the price when they are buying anything related to daily useful items and for the treatment of medical issues. However, some persons think that they need a better quality at a cheaper price but in present days most of the companies are offering good quality things at more price. Whereas some people are poor and some are rich. The people who are rich can afford any expensive item without considering the cost of an item. For example, today most of the smartphones are expensive with simple features whereas we can pick the phone with the same specifications at a lower price but most of the people a buying expensive items due to the following trend.
Secondly, in most of the developed countries such as the United States, Canada, and Australia the cost of any medical treatment is expensive and cannot able to pay by low-class families. Moreover, from my experience in the last few months regarding the dental treatment which was happened for me in India is lesser than the cost said by the Canadian hospitals. They told me a big number like seven thousand dollars whereas I did it for two thousand dollars in India. In addition, most of the individuals in my country bargain against the farmers but the same people buy the products in big malls without any discount.
Finally, In my opinion, money plays a crucial role when purchasing any product or service.
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but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75378787879 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50144299494 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564393939394 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0051042657 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259059542598 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0946074446737 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048071983144 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138360050568 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625138317999 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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