The table below shows the consumer durables (telephone, refrigerator, etc.) owned in Britain from 1972 to 1983.
Write a reportfor a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The table provides information about the percentages of households with different type of consumer durables owned in Britain between 1972 and 1983. Overall, all types of households increased.
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At the beginning, television and the vacuum cleaner was the majority which accounted for 93% and 87% respectively. At the end of the period, television still the majority and refrigerator became the majority which was 98% and 94% respectively. For the least part of households was central heating in 1972 and dishwasher in 1983 both accounted below 5%. It can be seen that dishwasher exist since 1978 and video exist since 1983 which were below 18% so both are not significant to the consumer. However, central heating rose sharply, from 3% rising to 64% during the period. In contrast, television rose steadily, from 93% rising to 98% during the period. Finally, all consumer durables are increased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, so, still, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 754.0 965.302439024 78% => OK
No of words: 144.0 196.424390244 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23611111111 4.92477711251 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.46410161514 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83413874916 2.65546596893 107% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576388888889 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 283.868780488 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.579019825 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.7777777778 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 22.9334400587 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.88888888889 5.23603664747 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.17769702072 0.215688989381 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721099359435 0.103423049105 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826816252003 0.0843802449381 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155251145388 0.15604864568 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469936516405 0.0819641961636 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.