Write a letter to your neighbor about the damage that occurred to your car while he was parking his car in the lane outside your home.
In the letter, you should:
describe the damage
say how you feel about this problem
suggest to him what actions he should take.
Dear Mr. Johnson,
I am writing this letter with regard to the damage that you caused to my 2019 KIA Cerato while you were parking in front of my front yard two days ago.
The left mirror of my car was totally crushed making it look like it missed an ear. Moreover, there were massive scratches on the left side and the backlight was completely destroyed because you drove in reverse too fast and could not control your vehicle.
At that moment, I felt really upset because it was my favorite car and was newly bought 2 weeks ago. However, I am not angry at you as you have been a very kind and good neighbor to my family ever since we got here.
As for my compensation, I just need you to pay me back the money for the repair fees. I already took the car to maintenance that day and my car insurance will cover up some money. I will pay the rest with my own credit card and you can give me the money later.
I look forward to receiving my compensation.
Yours faithfully,
Truong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...front of my front yard two days ago. The left mirror of my car was totally cr...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... and could not control your vehicle. At that moment, I felt really upset beca...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...to my family ever since we got here. As for my compensation, I just need you ...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and you can give me the money later. I look forward to receiving my compensat...
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Line 23, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ou can give me the money later. I look forward to receiving my compensati...
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Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orward to receiving my compensation. Yours faithfully, Truong
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, look, moreover, really, so, while, as for, as to, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 850.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52127659574 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2712952812 2.54303337028 89% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648936170213 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 247.5 290.88556701 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8156222762 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.0 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 16.8248392259 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 4.34317383033 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191144309241 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753799698683 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433582670487 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0908718597124 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531789262015 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.94 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.