Many parents believe that when their children read book for entertainment, they are just wasting their time, and that they should read only serious, educational books. What is your opinion about this?
Book reading has been an integral part of our culture. Majority of the parents are of the opinion that their kids should not read fictional content as it results into futile expenditure of time, whereas they should invest more time reading factual or curriculum related materials. In my opinion, both genre of the book has their importance in an overall development of a child and it must be an amalgamation of stories as well as subjuct books.
To begin with, most of the children develop their taste towards book reading in their early age and usually its content is fictional stories, to which they bond well. This habit eventually helps them in developing and strengthening their reading and imaginative skills which last forever. Now-a-days, entertainment is not limited to comics, however children are inquisitive to know about their culture, legacy and mythology so that they can connect with their roots. According to research by Poland University, kids who started reading in early age had higher neural firing in both side of their brain which aids in enhancing their learning capacity.
On the flip side, education is an indispensable part of a child's life in order to attain academic excellence. |Presently, schools are customizing their courses which helps them in structuring their thoughts, thereby organizing their life. It has been scientifically proven that humans can absorb more information in their childhood, which amplifies their cognitive thinking. As per British Journal, children who attended kindergarten has higher cognitive functioning of their brain.
To conclude, it is like hand in glove situation where students must be reading imaginary as well as course books for developing imaginative and logical thinking leading to overall mental development.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...in an overall development of a child and it must be an amalgamation of stories as...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, well, whereas, as well as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38078291815 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85486451341 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.1909528802 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360813121874 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130475211753 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680032737504 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201479755943 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0892617889678 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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