You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel.
say where you think you left the papers
explain why they are so important
tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I have recently attended a business conference at your hotel 'Rosewood london' and regrettably misplaced some important documents in the room I stayed in. I am hoping you would be kind enough to give me a call once you have it.
I stayed in your hotel from 24th to 25th october in room 524 and attended a conference at the business Meeting Hall on 24th october. I departed the next day and just after I reached Manchester, I noticed that I have left those documents unattended in my hotel room, perhaps inside the drawer that was placed beside my bed. All of those documents are placed inside a blue folder with my name ‘Mike Buchanan’ written on top of it.
In particular, these documents are extremely important to me. They contain some confidential financial information about my company, a presentation and some notes that I took during the conference. Without those documents, I would be in great trouble. I need to submit a few of these papers to my company before the end of this month.
I would request you to ask your staff to conduct a thorough search in the room and then hold this folder in your possession. Please give me a call at 0161-508745124578 once you have it. I will arrange someone to collect it for me or perhaps fly to london to receive it personally.
Thank you in advance for your kind help.
Yours faithfully,
Mike Buchanan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... to give me a call once you have it. I stayed in your hotel from 24th to 25th ...
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Line 5, column 134, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... business Meeting Hall on 24th october. I departed the next day and just after I ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 32.9175257732 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 26.3917525773 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1158.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 245.0 206.0 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72653061224 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82452518558 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559183673469 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 358.2 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8961618899 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7142857143 76.5299724578 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225888076439 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734132789499 0.0766984524023 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768669326358 0.0603063233224 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142929529323 0.12726935374 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0812956579259 0.0580467560999 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.