SOME PEOPLE THINK IN THE MODERN SOCIETY, INDIVIDUALS ARE BECOMING MORE DEPENDENT THAN EACH OTHER, WHILE OTHERS SAY THAT INDIVIDUALS ARE BECOMING MORE INDEPENDENT. DISCUSS BOTH VIEW, GIVE OPINION?
In the incessantly developing world, while persons are striving for a number of personal objectives by having independent lives, the others choose to focus on strengthening and expanding their relationship to obtain fruitful results. In my opinion, I would be inclined to the idea of living self-determining lives on account of several reasons.
It is evident that having independent lives is advantageous to some groups of people. This is comparatively accurate when it comes to women since they will not be confronted with the demanding pressure from the husbands. With these liberated lives, women are able to pursue higher professional degrees relating to Laws or Science or become the activists supporting women’s movements, thereby ultimately gaining more recognition and appreciation from the general public.
Furthermore, an increasing number of young yet audacious teenagers are willing to build their own careers at the early age. For example, some students opt for studying abroad and acquiring admission of the prestigious high schools with a view to receiving valuable knowledge and skills of their favorite fields such as Biotechnology or Music. Thanks to the eagerness and determination to have desirable lives without relying on parents, these youngsters stand a high chance of becoming exceptional talents, thus elevating the national stature in the long run.
It would be an overstatement to claim that all people are independent without any reliance. Companies which possess excellent mechanism including tremendous solidarity and effective collaboration among employees and employers may significantly enhance the productivity and acquire achievements. Nonetheless, the abrupt disappearance of the most competent individuals may put the rest of the group into anarchy. Besides, minority groups living in the foreign countries like China Town in California can help support each other to overcome any cultural differences, thus bringing a great sense of belonging. However, they are more likely to be passive and prone to negative impacts derived from changes of the living environment.
In conclusion, living dependent seems to be a good option, yet its merits cannot outweigh the sense of satisfaction and the long-term benefits of independent lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 459, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...e recognition and appreciation from the general public. Furthermore, an increasing number of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, may, nonetheless, so, then, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1944.0 1615.20841683 120% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66763848397 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18211657914 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 226.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65889212828 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 609.3 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.7078045397 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.857142857 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122008662407 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0336437875628 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.022328793921 0.0667982634062 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0548699526047 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021248531024 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.54 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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