Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Technology has simplified our lives by freeing up our time, connecting us to one another, and making information easily accessible.
Time is the most valuable resource that a person has. It is constantly running out and has no replacement. The advent of technologies such as airplanes has made it so that people can travel from one place to another in a matter of hours or days rather than weeks or months. In serving as the replacement to typewriters, computers have saved countless hours of re-typing entire papers to fix small errors. These examples are just a fraction of the many ways that technology has freed up our time in ways that allow for the simple pleasures in life such as pursuing hobbies or spending quality time with loved ones.
This quality time with those we care about can happen in many ways, but technology has made it so that we are not limited to bonding only with those who are in the same physical space as us. Rather, it has connected us globally in ways that make maintaining relationships easier. This connection not only fosters close connections between those we already know, but also allows for us to get to know people from around the world without ever needing to invest the financial capital to travel to a new place.
In the same way that technology removes many barriers to relationships with people in a variety of places, it also provides access to information that was once totally inaccessible. Someone may not have a library in their town, but their smart phone provides them access to books, music, and videos that teach them about the cochinil dye from Mexico or the trade wars being started by the US. One could imagine that this view into a world unknown could make someone's life more complicated by giving them a taste of what they are missing without allowing them full entrance. This is not a convincing argument because without technology one might still have a sense that there is more in the world than what is in front of them.
Technology has simplified our lives by freeing up our time, connecting us to one another, and making information easily accessible.
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| 2020-01-17 | Siddiqur Rahman | 66 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, still, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 33.0505617978 139% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 58.6224719101 94% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1761.0 2235.4752809 79% => OK
No of words: 368.0 442.535393258 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78532608696 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6004156981 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51902173913 0.4932671777 105% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 704.065955056 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.77640449438 338% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 23.0359550562 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.8469581124 60.3974514979 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.785714286 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2857142857 23.4991977007 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92857142857 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141502165802 0.243740707755 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553336458418 0.0831039109588 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0911226881012 0.0758088955206 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13088634863 0.150359130593 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116494531707 0.0667264976115 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 14.1392134831 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 48.8420337079 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.8 12.1639044944 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 100.480337079 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.2143820225 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.