Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others think people should be free to choose.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Whether extreme sports should be banned from anybody trying or it should be the decision of an individual who is willing to practise the sport has always been a controversial topic. In this essay, I will be giving my opinions and discuss both ideas.
To begin with, I don’t think that the government should decide someone’s hobbies. That being said, some dangerous sports can cause fatal consequences for both participant and environment. If that’s the case, then should and must be banned for a healthy society. In this case, someone’s hobby is not as important as their life. It’s the government’s duty to take precautions for the safest surroundings for its people. However, if the sport is not as dangerous to kill a person, it could be decided by free will by the participant.
Therefore, if circumstances are safe and the person is in their right mind, it shouldn’t be limited by law. Because some people think that trying or practising extreme sports are a way of relieving stress and finding motivation. People who are working in front of computers while sitting constantly seek for some adrenaline in their lives. These sports can prevent depression and anxiety by clearing their minds with just an hour a month.
To sum up, I think that as long as the sport is not deadly and the participant is not mentally unstable, because they may not be able to evaluate the situation clearly, then it should be voluntary by the person. Nevertheless, there should be exceptions where a human’s life is endangered. I believe that we can find a middle-ground for everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, while, i think, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03731343284 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08703661374 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570895522388 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0490809993 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.36190689046 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116350774505 0.084324248473 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0783847932334 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218903138177 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417048758323 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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