You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel
Write a letter to the manger of the hotel . In your letter
Say where you think you left the paper
Explain why they are so important
Tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear sir/ Madam,
I am Bala, I have attended a meeting in your hotel on July 31st, 2019. I would like to inform you that I have misplaced some important documents in your hotel premises on that day. It would be quite helpful if you can help me locate the document that is misplaced.
I think the meeting was in the second floor of the hotel, I forgot the meeting room’s name but we were provided lunch in the same floor Lunch Hall. I think I left the document in the lunch hall. Can you please make sure you identify the missing documents?.
The documents have all the statistics that were concluded for the fiscal year 2019-2020. Most of the information available in the documents are quite confidential . I may lose my job if these information was lost or got in wrong hands.
Once you get hold of the document , please make sure if any seal is broken and inform me about this . Pleas contact me in the following mobile number. I will come and collect the document from you
Awaiting your response.
Regards,
Balaprasanth. P
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear sir/ Madam, I am Bala, I have attended a meeting in ...
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Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d for the fiscal year 2019-2020. Most of the information available in the documen...
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Line 4, column 164, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... in the documents are quite confidential . I may lose my job if these information ...
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Line 4, column 188, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this information' or 'these informations'?
Suggestion: this information; these informations
...ite confidential . I may lose my job if these information was lost or got in wrong hands. Once...
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Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ds. Once you get hold of the document , please make sure if any seal is broken ...
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Line 5, column 101, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... seal is broken and inform me about this . Pleas contact me in the following mobil...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...l come and collect the document from you Awaiting your response. Regards, Bala...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, second, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60752688172 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55136203306 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602150537634 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.11859354 44.8134815571 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4166666667 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256243603827 0.216113520407 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0899676813002 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.090963924624 0.0603063233224 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131767309562 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985415428906 0.0580467560999 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.16 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.93 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.