The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
According to the memo, the number of viewers for Super Screen produced movies have reduced while the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers have increased. Thus the advertising director suggests that a greater share of budget needs to be allocated for advertising from the coming year onwards. Though the suggestion given by the director may hold water, but there are several unfounded assumptions, that if not substantiated, will weaken the persuasiveness of the argument. therefore the following questions must be addressed.
First, it is said in the memo that the percentage of the positive reviews from the movie reviewers have increased. does this mean that the number of positive reviews have increased? The memo does not give a count of the total number of movie reviewers who have reviewed. therefore, the number of positive reviews may be lower than in any other years. The data mentioned is insufficient to determine if there is an improvement in the quality of the movie.
Second, the argument states that the there is lack of awareness among the people about the good quality movies that are available. but is it true that the fewer number of viewers is bcause of this reason? there can also be a possibility that the advertising has reached many people and these people just chose not to view it as they doubt its quality. it is necessary to carry out thorough survey, that provides information about the number of people who are aware of the movie and their opinions about it.
it is mentioned in the memo, that the contents of the reviews are not reaching the prospective viewer. but does this mean that there is lack of advertising strategies? it may also be the case, that the reviews have reached the public and because of these reviews, the y
In conclusion, the director might have proposed a sound solution by stating that the problem lies not with the quality of the movie but with lack of awareness among people. And he/ she might also be right in suggesting that a greater share of budget be allocated to advertising rather than to improve the quality of the movies. but more data is needed before we reach the final decision. if the director answers the above questions, then the answers might help in properly evaluating the validity of the argument.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 11 15
No. of Words: 391 350
No. of Characters: 1860 1500
No. of Different Words: 166 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.447 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.757 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.553 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 124 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 94 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 67 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 43 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 35.545 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 22.096 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.909 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.411 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.68 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.12 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 168, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...iews by movie reviewers have increased. Thus the advertising director suggests that ...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...hare of budget needs to be allocated for advertising from the coming year onwards...
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Line 1, column 488, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ken the persuasiveness of the argument. therefore the following questions must be address...
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Line 1, column 488, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: therefore,
...ken the persuasiveness of the argument. therefore the following questions must be address...
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Line 4, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Does
...rom the movie reviewers have increased. does this mean that the number of positive r...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...r of movie reviewers who have reviewed. therefore, the number of positive reviews may be ...
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Line 7, column 132, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...good quality movies that are available. but is it true that the fewer number of vie...
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Line 7, column 206, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...er of viewers is bcause of this reason? there can also be a possibility that the adve...
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Line 7, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so be a possibility that the advertising has reached many people and these people...
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Line 7, column 354, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...t to view it as they doubt its quality. it is necessary to carry out thorough surv...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...movie and their opinions about it. it is mentioned in the memo, that the cont...
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Line 10, column 104, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: But
...re not reaching the prospective viewer. but does this mean that there is lack of ad...
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Suggestion: It
...here is lack of advertising strategies? it may also be the case, that the reviews ...
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Suggestion: But
...n to improve the quality of the movies. but more data is needed before we reach the...
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Suggestion: If
...ded before we reach the final decision. if the director answers the above question...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, second, so, then, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 19.6327345309 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 28.8173652695 111% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 55.5748502994 94% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 16.3942115768 43% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1917.0 2260.96107784 85% => OK
No of words: 391.0 441.139720559 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90281329923 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44676510885 4.56307096286 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64147947285 2.78398813304 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 204.123752495 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.445012787724 0.468620217663 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.76447105788 80% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.70958083832 74% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.22255489022 47% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 19.7664670659 96% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.8473053892 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.4714048416 57.8364921388 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.894736842 119.503703932 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5789473684 23.324526521 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.31578947368 5.70786347227 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 6.88822355289 87% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188769604824 0.218282227539 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0546893162263 0.0743258471296 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547300712448 0.0701772020484 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102834247815 0.128457276422 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0716663088562 0.0628817314937 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 14.3799401198 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.3550499002 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.197005988 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.5979740519 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.32208582834 94% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 98.500998004 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.1389221557 90% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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