Some people think that genetically modified (GM) crops are a positive development. Others, however, argue that they are potentially dangerous. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In this concurrent world,it is undoubtedly true that the companies give a job opportunities to the new generation.while,some people concur that employee who work for long period of time should encourage them to leave at the age of 55.However,I partially agree with given statements and I believe that the younger and elder employees both are important forms of experience and state of the arts technologies.
To commence with the first notion,There are myriads things to be shared in its favour first and foremost ,mindset of young people are more flexible and adept to new things and innovation.As a result,the younger people are aware of the new technologies because they are much technophile.In contrast,some older people are technophobes.moreover,elder people are also well experience mind but can not grasp power a latest thing and they work according to the set of minds.Alternatively,the business would be dramatically declined because of the core value of elder generation without experience.Hence,if business could be widely increase then the needs of right combination in younger and older generation.
Shifting towards the second school of thought the elder employee retire the age of 55 year.Therefore,so many people get retire is impact and burden faced in our ministry to support of the pension retirement.Furthermore,in government has negative impact of the economy.thus,the regime has decided to tax would be rise in the society.so it is totally repercussion in our economy.
In Recapitulation,the elder and young employee are crucial beneficial to the companies,elder employee never retirement in age of 55 but to encourage that to work in with own interest based in companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, second, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, in contrast, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48854961832 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.00621567065 2.80592935109 143% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572519083969 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 65.0 20.2975951904 320% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 179.597292574 49.4020404114 364% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 359.5 106.682146367 337% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 65.5 20.7667163134 315% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 33.25 7.06120827912 471% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0675682621261 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357005077054 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0288201622919 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0357005077054 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288201622919 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.2 13.0946893788 284% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.96 50.2224549098 -6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.8 11.3001002004 264% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.45 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.08 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.0 10.1190380762 277% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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