People remember special gifts or presents that they have received. Why? Use specific
reasons and examples to support your answer.
Everybody in this world loves to receive gifts from their families and friends. There can
be multiple reasons for this. In my opinion, gifts can turn a melancholic person into a
happier one in no time, due to the fact that it tells the receiver that how much the
presenter cares for him, or even how he wants the receiver to remember that day
throughout his life.
First of all, presenting a gift to someone is not as an easy task as it may sound. The
presenter has to put in some thinking regarding the likes and the dislikes of the receiver.
Only if a person really cared for the receiver, he would put in his energy and time to go
through this process of curating a perfect gift. For example, when I was a kid, I hated
toys which were made out of plastic. But just because my birthday was around the
corner, my best friend searched each and every toy store in our locality for a toy which
had no plastic in it, and finally was able to find one made out of wood. The fact that he
cared for my likes and dislikes and took efforts in finding out a suitable gift for me
portrayed the feeling that how much he cared for me.
Secondly, some of the gifts tend to remain with a person for a long period of time, and
these are the gifts that take him down the memory lane whenever his eyes fall on it.
Looking at that present, many old memories become fresh and bring out a slight smile
on a person's face. Lets take an example, a father who gifted a pen to his son in his
childhood, might stay with the him until his adulthood. Looking at this pen or maybe
even using it on a daily basis, would remind him of his father and all the dear memories
he had created with him throughout his childhood. To sum up, gifts can prove to be
objects that lock up all the memories of a particular day in them, and as a result many
people love gifts because they can then cherish these memories later in their life.
In conclusion, gifts or presents always bring in joy and a feeling of compassion in people
throughout the globe and across any culture, and because of the above reasons people
tend to remember special gifts which they have received throughout their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
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Message: Did you mean 'Let's'?
Suggestion: Let's
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Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'him'?
Suggestion: the; him
... son in his childhood, might stay with the him until his adulthood. Looking at this pe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, as to, for example, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 13.8261648746 130% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 52.0 43.0788530466 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 52.1666666667 119% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.0752688172 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 409.0 407.700716846 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.38875305623 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22294168671 2.67179642975 83% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.511002444988 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4254067565 48.9658058833 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.666666667 100.406767564 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2666666667 20.6045352989 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2666666667 5.45110844103 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.53405017921 573% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147830048821 0.236089414692 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529399912691 0.076458572812 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601372784908 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0449661992735 0.150856017488 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552551783975 0.0645574589148 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.48 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 86.8835125448 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.