The diagram below shows the average hours of unpaid work per week done by people in different categories. (Unpaid work refers to such activities as childcare in the home, housework and gardening.)
The bar chart illustrates the activities done by people of distinct group which is unpayable job. Such as childcare in the home,
housework and gardening. The time is measured in average house per week.
Overall, Parents with more children's has more household work compared to less children's. The men almost works the same hours in
different family size. In no children scenario, both of them shares equal task, a high part of task was carried by women.
Firstly, In more than 3 children's case, Women works for 60 hours which is highest time spent totally while men works for 17 hours which
is the lease value among the all. women works for around 52 hours if they have one or two children to carry out the house works.
Lastly, In without child's family situation, Men carries same amount of task as of in 1 to 2 children but time consumed by women gradually decreased to
30 from 52 hours per week and it is the third lowest value in females category.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 128, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
.... The men almost works the same hours in different family size. In no children sc...
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'is the highest'.
Suggestion: is the highest
...ns case, Women works for 60 hours which is highest time spent totally while men works for ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tally while men works for 17 hours which is the lease value among the all. women ...
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Line 8, column 35, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Women
...ich is the lease value among the all. women works for around 52 hours if they have ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, third, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 799.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67251461988 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32758823129 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649122807018 0.547539520022 119% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 56.0594922084 43.030603864 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7777777778 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 3.83414634146 209% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237285589197 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117100940196 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877511844986 0.0843802449381 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10701794114 0.15604864568 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710083853949 0.0819641961636 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.2329268293 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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