In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how can it be solved?
Health issues among people are on rise. Some people blame this increase in health problems to an unhealthy lifestyle. This essay will first discuss the possible reason for this new age problem and then elaborate upon the solutions to fight against this.
To begin with, modern lifestyle has witnessed changing eating habits and deteriorating work culture. People today follow a busy routine with both genders of the house sharing responsibilities for bread and butter. The constant competition and no time to devout for self, has led to an increase in anxiety and depression among the workforce. Moreover, with the large number of fast-food restaurants mushrooming around the city, the young population find dining out as a mode of relaxation. The fast food trend is catching fast among the young generation who find it easy to cook and to be time saving. Disappointingly people have completely failed to realize that what they eat has a significant impact on their body.
The solution to this problem requires a paradigm shift in lifestyle. People need to understand the importance of eating a balanced diet. Though fast food is easy to cook and delicious to eat, it has a long term effect on health. For instance, the rising number of people suffering from cholesterol and diabetes are the epitome of drawbacks of modern lifestyle. Moreover, the focus should also be placed on exercise and yoga. Governments and corporates can help achieve this by setting up gyms and yoga classes in office premises and public parks respectively. Additionally, these large entities can also set up health camps to make people aware of the state of their health. In addition to these, the focus should also be placed on reducing stress among workers by ensuring work-life balance. The offices should give preference to creating a happier and healthier place for employees.
To conclude, I would say that the increasing number of people with health problems has already sounded an alarm. It is no time to become complacent and ignore this issue at our won risk. The fight against this requires changes in daily routine and saving more time for ourselves. The nation with the sick population cannot grow and would eventually come to a halt. Therefore, its time for everyone to put health before everything else.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 380.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05789473684 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70166666524 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573684210526 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3044170589 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5652173913 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5217391304 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.04347826087 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231838560276 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0640117700966 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050270136832 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147427279761 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0603435958644 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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