Some say you should always marry for love,others say that in an uncertain world it is wiser to marry for money. Discuss both views and give your opinion?
Marriage for money was virtually unheard of just past decades. However it has been absolutely normal if you know someone who has started a martial life with another one. Nonetheless, still ones who really eager to tie a knot with his partner lovely. my position about this issue is located somewhere between this two different views which I am supposed to argue about it as follows.
In one hand, it is not definitely a successful life if humans begin a life because of wealth. In other words, the viability of love directly not related to money and after a while everything is going to get vogue. To illustrate my statement I would say that a few of royal marriage has fallen during the history, because they have not found prosperity with living together while both side have been affluent. As r results, affordability certainly play a supplementary role in marriage, though it does not guarantee by no means.
On the other hand, there is a general agreement which expresses that solely love would not be able to forward a life ahead. The reason behind this idea is that the life has its emotional and economic requirements, thus the kindness is responsible for just one section of this trend. A huge flood of divorces perfectly underline this issue the individuals should not ignore the influence of monetary parameters on marriage. Particularly, developing countries which struggling with troubles related to finance have experienced the highly rate of family breakdowns and divorces.
To Summarize, from my perspective, both above-mentioned arguments are essentially vital for reaching to for long hours with loved ones who surrounded us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nonetheless, really, so, still, thus, while, you know, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07720588235 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87656747927 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643382352941 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.0144417641 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.230769231 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11900319686 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.03785353954 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0398601875408 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0764964021443 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332403884546 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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