Many offenders commit more crimes after serving the first punishment. Why is this happening, and what measures can be taken to tackle this problem?
A plethora of criminals who spent sometime in a jail as a kind of punishment for the first time, might commit more crimes afterward. this due to several factors such as mix all prisoners together and sharing some risky stories. This essay aims to explore in further detail the reasons of such an issue and offers some solutions to overcome it before coming to a conclusion.
To begin with, it’s irrefutable that mixing prisoners together might exacerbate their attitudes and lead them to become more aggressive in the future. For instance, offenders who had small crimes such as thefts, or dangerous drunk drivers can easily being influenced by other dangerous prisoners who have been accused of murdering or drug trading. Mixing those people unfortunately makes them extremely dangerous for the global society, as they have heard a lot of bad experience from other prisoners during their stay.
In contrast, there are some solutions might help in alleviate such a problem. First of all, separate prisoners into several sections based on the kind of crime that they did to avoid sharing some negative experience with other dangerous prisoners. Second of all, enhancing the prisoners thoughts and skills, by providing some theoretical and vocational session and prepared them to become a productive member of the global society. Denmark as an example has the best strategy in dealing with prisoners, as the government encourage them to learn and provides them some practical sessions such as handicrafts and other in order to prepare them to be an active member at their society. Finally, there is no doubt that the type of punishment is playing a fundamental role in mitigating this problem. Therefore, many advance nations nowadays impose different valuable penalties on offered such as working as volunteer in elderly house or helping disable people. Such this action has remarkable results on offenders mentalities as it makes them to become more helpful and active in their societies.
To sum up, mixing all prisoners together is the main cause of many offenders to do more crimes. However, following the offered solutions might help offenders to become more productive for their societies.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for instance, in contrast, kind of, no doubt, such as, first of all, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1858.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 355.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2338028169 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34067318298 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71062330007 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535211267606 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.0422019835 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.866666667 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154082850235 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588886831584 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403134579505 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103791674983 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276692036581 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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