It is said that the amount of violence on the TV programs have negative effects on our social development and therefore should be reduced.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this Opinion?
It is argued by some individuals that more violent scene on television programs have downside impacts in our social growth and therefore government must take some steps to minimize this. I completely agree that violence shown on big screen gives ideas to criminal minded people to create tense environment and thus it must be stopped to clear the fear of society.
Violent films gives ideas to the criminal minded people in creating tense environment in public. Violent films showing riots and vandalization provides notion that these things are possible to create fear between people for the sake of personal or political means. A survey conducted by N.G.O, revealed that the Televisions news are the prime sources to create more fear on religion fights between people of different beliefs rather than awareness. Especially in nations like India, where people of different religious believe habitat together.
Therefore, this violence should be controlled in order to minimize the chances of accidents at social level. There are currently various organizations which keep eye on different broadcasting networks and have rights to cancel their license if violated against the rules and regulations. For instance, in India, the Indian Film academy examine every film before making it public and provide certification to release pictures on various broadcasts, so that public can watch the limited and acceptable range of content.
In conclusion, I completely agree that television industry should be controlled by regulatory authority in order to present acceptable range of episodes which maintain the peace on social level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 292, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: O
...itical means. A survey conducted by N.G.O, revealed that the Televisions news are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, as to, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49206349206 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7472815763 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603174603175 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3146626444 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.4 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12403311409 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0500117161118 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611498842229 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0842377985624 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552257962619 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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