Some people think that competitive sports should be included as a subject in school, while others believe that it has negative effect on children. Discuss both the view and give your opinio
In this contemporary settings, sports has been given paramount importance. Whilst, the believers have thought of attaching sports subject in the academic curriculum targeting students in overall physical development with an academic section. However, others hold the opposite view. We shall look into both views before forming an opinion.
In a recent couple of years, the third millennial has made improvements in the field of the stadium such as
Olympics, 2020 and so on. firstly, people have made athletic an international sport taking to higher levels worldwide. Moreover, the curiosity of playing as a sportsman has inspired the movement of initiating interest in sports and making it part of education. As a result, the school authorities have taken pragmatic steps towards exaggerating the more subjects in the schools such as physical education. secondary, school institutions will give a new face of athletic every year to the country. Besides this, constant practice and annual examinations will keen students to build up their minds in a practical part. Lastly, the prime advantage of this strategy would be to generate healthy and disease-free youth. Which apt the saying that "killing the two birds with one stone".Simultaneously, students will bear the fruits of both studies as well as building up endurance and strength.
On the other spectrum, a toddler will be distracted from their theoretical knowledge and put the main focus on playing and sports activities. Consequently, which leads to a lack of theoretical knowledge to understand the life experience and moral values.
To pen down, apart from the most obvious benefits of flexibility, strength and endurance consisting of practical knowledge of sports. I personally opine that academic knowledge is a core essential and cannot be substituted at any cost.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, second, so, third, well, apart from, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45804195804 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23864757036 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632867132867 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7168210982 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.875 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0625 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152795883043 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457164520767 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353398253333 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654825930883 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0519758032683 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.09 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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