The graph shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.
The graph illustrates about the age groups of people from 65 and above during 1940-2040 in Japan,Sweden and the USA.It is seen that the count of elderly people has been predicted to surge up over the century in all the three places.
Countries like the USA and Sweden fluctuate similarly throughout the trend starting from 6% and 8% in 1940 respectively.
However,while Sweden reached an altitude of 20% in the near 2020,the USA experienced a minor downfall with an outcome of 14% in 2020.
On the other hand, the ageing population in Japan was much below the scale(5% and below) till the early 2020's.However,it hit a high off to another 5% after 2020 and is even expected to reach the zenith of over 25% out-winning the other two places.
Summing up all the facts,it can be inversely incurred that the younger population will go down in the future in these cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , Sweden
...m 65 and above during 1940-2040 in Japan,Sweden and the USA.It is seen that the count o...
^^^^^^^
Line 1, column 117, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
...g 1940-2040 in Japan,Sweden and the USA.It is seen that the count of elderly peopl...
^^
Line 4, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , while
...6% and 8% in 1940 respectively. However,while Sweden reached an altitude of 20% in th...
^^^^^^
Line 6, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: However
... scale5% and below till the early 2020s.However,it hit a high off to another 5% after 2...
^^^^^^^
Line 6, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
...% and below till the early 2020s.However,it hit a high off to another 5% after 2020...
^^^
Line 8, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , it
... two places. Summing up all the facts,it can be inversely incurred that the youn...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, similarly, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 723.0 965.302439024 75% => OK
No of words: 151.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7880794702 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75246638943 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 101.0 106.607317073 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.668874172185 0.547539520022 122% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4220172856 43.030603864 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.6 112.824112599 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 5.23603664747 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163190584299 0.215688989381 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744339150946 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760180866956 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744339150946 0.15604864568 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0760180866956 0.0819641961636 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.06136585366 112% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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