Is it better to enjoy your money when you earn it or is it better to save your money for some time in the future? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
Nowadays, money has an important role in humans’ lives undeniably. It is so important since most our goals become real and possible with its help. So, we should understand how we use this precious gift. Some people like to spend their money as they earn it from their career or any other source. However, some other people want to save all or some of it for their future. I think people must save a part of their money for their future days due to three reasons that I am going to discuss accordingly.
First, no one can predict what is going to happen in the future of us. Saving some money can assist us to counteract any incident that may happen in our future. For example, I was working in a company and I was satisfied with the job. I had a friend there who was so naive about everything; he had a good salary and extra benefits from the job. However, he thinks that we live in this universe just for one time so we should enjoy it as much as we can. He always like to buy luxurious things and spend most of his money in each mouth. Suddenly, the company decided to reduce its staff and they let a number of their employee go in the first phase of economic difficulties. One of the names in the list was my friend that had to leave the job as soon as possible. He freaked out and just had a heart attack since he was not going to be able to pay all of his many depts. So, as you see people must save some money for a dooms day that eventually come some day for any one.
Second, people can be functional and healthy to work until a normal age. In my opinion, it is so crucial to save your money for your old days. Because we can continue working hardly during our young period and if we have not had any money in those days, it would be so difficult to handle all the expenses especially health care issues.
Third, money is one of the key parameters that can help us to improve in our life during various times. For instance, if a couple intended to buy a house for themselves in the future, they must have saved some money in previous years which can assist them fundamentally in this process. But, if they have not think about this matter in advance, they would definitely encounter serious problems by considering inflammation and other economical disadvantages that may occur in future.
So, it is so vital to plan for our money wisely and what and where we wanted to spend it in our life.
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...here we wanted to spend it in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, third, for example, for instance, i think, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 15.1003584229 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 9.8082437276 163% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 69.0 43.0788530466 160% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1961.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 456.0 407.700716846 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30043859649 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.62105577807 4.48103885553 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32402240524 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 629.1 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.94265232975 20% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.7261726243 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.2608695652 100.406767564 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8260869565 20.6045352989 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.82608695652 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 18.0 11.8709677419 152% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216318556193 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672111688943 0.076458572812 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831293162508 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120826404886 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409648507166 0.0645574589148 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 11.7677419355 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.66 10.9000537634 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 86.8835125448 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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