It is expected in the near future that there will be a higher proportion of old people compared to younger population in some countries. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples.
Considering the pace of alterations in medical achievements, some diseases, which used to be fatal, can now be cured, leading to greater longevity. Thus, the population of the elderly is anticipated to exceed that of the young in some nations. What is open to question is whether this trend will end up in a pool of benefits. To make a clear picture, it is of importance to put this matter into a broader context.
On the one hand, it might be perceived, the older people become, the more benefits they deliver for the country. In effect, the young could easily acquire a wealth of experience the elderly has achieved. Since governments have an insatiable appetite for pushing back the frontiers of advancement, they welcome the wave of the old population. By way of illustration, there are some countries, employing old experienced men as executives in some critical organizations, such as The National Aeronautics and Space Administration known as NASA, playing a part in keeping the wheels of the industry turning and developing the country. For this reason, the growth of the elderly has been, and will be, garnered by some.
On the other hand, by scaling up the population of the elderly, states should draw up a much budget to issue these people with medical care. Aging, these figures may become exposed to contracting some severe diseases, needing more health care, resulting in allocating much budget to making them meet their needs. For instance, someday will come to be there will be old patients, suffering from incurable illnesses, such as blood and lung cancers, and physical disability, demanding for more and more health and medical care. The increase of the old population, therefore, has been, and will continue to be, faced with a large number of harsh critics.
In conclusion, much as the upward trend of the old population proportion would seem to be the bedrock of advancement, by sharing their knowledge and experience, financial reverses will feasibly become into the depth of attention. Indeed, it is agreed wholeheartedly, the increase of the old population will be at the root of further economic problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 87, Rule ID: A_MUCH_NN1[1]
Message: Maybe you should omit the article "a", leaving only 'much'.
Suggestion: much
...n of the elderly, states should draw up a much budget to issue these people with medic...
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Line 5, column 619, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...en, and will continue to be, faced with a large number of harsh critics. In conclusion, much a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0593220339 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89889009635 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553672316384 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3134823366 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.4 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223324024226 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0711724923579 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446642835494 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135373326068 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271861783449 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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