The charts below show the primary purposes for British people leaving their country in 1999 and the amount of those people who left the country for less than a week.
The bar graphs compare the two main reasons why British people went abroad in 1999 and the number of those who came back within a week.
Overall, as the age rises the more British leave the country for work/study, while the opposite trend could be seen for those leaving for holiday. It is also noticeable that the highest percentage of people returning within a week belongs to the age category of below 20, whereas the age group of 25-30 comprised the lowest figure.
Leaving the country for holiday was the most common reason for those under 20 at 80%, while this age category comprised the least number for work/study at 10%. The proportions of those who went abroad for a holiday and for work/study in the age group of 25-30 were equally distributed at approximately 40%. However, the figures for these reasons were opposite in the above 40; work/study had the biggest percentage at 70% while it was the smallest number for holiday at nearly 35%.
Returning within a week was commonly observed for those under 20 at approximately 65%, followed by the 20-25-year-old group at just over a half. The figures for 35-40 and above 40 were both roughly 40% but the 25-30 age group had the smallest number of cases at around 35%.
- The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010. 73
- Some people think that not all criminals should be kept in prison. Some criminals should do unpaid work to help other people in the community. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? 73
- The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world. 78
- The charts below show the proportions of British students at one university in England who were able to speak other languages in addition to English, in 2000 and 2010. 78
- The line graph below shows how much money was spent on cars in four different countries in Asia 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1021.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7488372093 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47568598422 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 106.607317073 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502325581395 0.547539520022 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.9 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 17.8815547422 43.030603864 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 127.625 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.875 22.9334400587 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256896699898 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134958327642 0.103423049105 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.075173826709 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17681044318 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678527180267 0.0819641961636 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.2329268293 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.