Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with serious results for the environment.what do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Nowadays, this particular topic is a highly controversial matter in hand which the majority of people are getting anxious by the dramatic impacts of deforestation on our planet. Doubtlessly there ought to be taken some action towards this utterly devastating issue. There are numerous way to prevent deforestation but it can be divided into three significant path.
Firstly, undoubtedly it is not laborious to clarify that if the trees that cut down had replaced with another one, the numbers of them would not have changed in another word by maintaining their numbers we could impact the long term effect of deforestation on environment.however, Statistics has demonstrated that the rapid decline of the trees are drastically faster than the replacements. but by improving our effort it could change to our benefit.this could be only possible if it became strictly forbidden for industries to continue working at jungles without a certain rules , supervisions and looking after the conservation areas.
Meanwhile, it is bitterly disappointing that people are carrying out their lifestyles without making any compromise. for instance by utilizing other renewable sources or even reusing the previous materials . Although nowadays there has been some establishment in changing the culture for example recycling due to educational system especially at very young age which is the most impeccable timing . that in gist all could lead to better judgment in future .
In a nutshell, deforestation had been influencing our planet but it has been supervised for proximately two decades . In my perspective the improvement in cultural and replacement of the trees could be the salvation of this situation that should be in parallel to each other to solve this critical problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'path' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'paths'.
Suggestion: paths
...t can be divided into three significant path. Firstly, undoubtedly it is not labo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: But
...astically faster than the replacements. but by improving our effort it could change...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...rking at jungles without a certain rules , supervisions and looking after the cons...
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Suggestion: For
...festyles without making any compromise. for instance by utilizing other renewable s...
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Suggestion: .
...s or even reusing the previous materials . Although nowadays there has been some ...
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Suggestion: .
... age which is the most impeccable timing . that in gist all could lead to better j...
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Suggestion: That
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Suggestion: .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1500.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20567293281 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641304347826 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.6334001522 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.363636364 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.90909090909 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15117666683 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.052803732652 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425465305628 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928822156915 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500113306557 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.