WRITE A LETTER TO THE MANAGER OF YOUR COMPANY THAT YOU WOULD LIKE TO TAKE A TRAINING COURSE. MENTION THE FOLLOWING:
-WHAT KIND OF TRAINING IT IS.
-HOW IT WILL BENEFIT YOUR JOB
-HOW YOU ARE GOING TO ARRANGE IT WITH YOUR WORK SCHEDULE
Dear Bert Sir,
I am writing this letter to seek permission for the upcoming training course on food safety in Indus institute. This course will make a competent microbiologist on the parameters of food analysis and determination of different pathogens in food products. Especially, Salmonella and Listeria, as these are the prominent contaminants found in food items in Southern Asia.
This safety course has many advantages for our lab including proficiency in testing of products. After this course, we can upgrade our lab by requesting senior management for the auditing for A-grade certification. This A-grade certification will help us in export business also.
The course work is for one week and the classes are in evening time. Therefore, it will highly obliged if you can change my shift to morning hours from 6 am to 2 pm and after the lunch break I will directly proceed to Indus institute. Additionally, if any work remains pending, I will do that during weekend.
I would be grateful, if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
The training course dates are from 7th to 14th of this month.
Yours faithfully,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Bert Sir, I am writing this letter to seek permiss...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... found in food items in Southern Asia. This safety course has many advantages f...
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...ication will help us in export business also. The course work is for one week an...
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Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'oblige'
Suggestion: oblige
...evening time. Therefore, it will highly obliged if you can change my shift to morning h...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tes are from 7th to 14th of this month. Yours faithfully, Vishal Bhat
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...h of this month. Yours faithfully, Vishal Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15873015873 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97073809792 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656084656085 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 294.3 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.9403772019 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.75 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151824054726 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573245969585 0.0766984524023 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504015735994 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0824576553716 0.12726935374 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500122657981 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 8.71597938144 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.