Many museums historical sites are mainly visited by tourist or not local people why is this the case and what can we done to attract more local people
Museums and historical sites are major part of tourists attractive but does not appeal the native people.there are various reasons and possible solutions which will be discuss in the below paragraphs.
To begin with, there are number of reasons behind this. Firstly, most of the local people have visited their city's local sites and do not want to visit them any more. In addition, there are same old artifacts and exhibitions in museums which also affects the visit of local people as they have visit before. secondly, every museum and historical buildings charge entry fees every time for the visit and people would not like to spend money for same places. For example, I went to visit the statue of unity which is located in my city and I would not like to spend money again to see same place.
Several measure can be taken to appeal localities to visit their local attraction.fitstly, spreading awareness among local people about the local attraction by using different medias like t.v , radio , banners and hoardings. These will attract more local people. moreover, government can make efforts by reducing tickets prizes or offering discounts which can attract more local people.
In conclusion, it is hard to attract Logan people due to familiarity with the local museum but proper efforts by government and various discounts can help with attracting local people to visit museums and historical places near to their area
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08050847458 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54783000837 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559322033898 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 377.1 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.1889230799 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.9 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.448786728634 0.244688304435 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.183745067427 0.084324248473 218% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101545938749 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.267993341239 0.151304729494 177% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0878738835806 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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