Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of the society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
It is believed that parents should help their children to become a good citizen in society. Nevertheless, a group of people strongly claims that this is the duty of school. In my opinion, parents should take their responsibility in teaching kids about moral values instead of relying on teachers at school.
On one hand, normally children would like to obey their parents rather than outsiders as parents have the most close-knit relationship with them. Therefore, parents have strong abilities to tell them how to deal with society with some valuable merits such as patience, obedience, and honesty which will become their future personality. It creates not only the way that they treat with other people but also their mindset. Besides, no one can understand children more than their parents. Being people who born and raised their children, parents can know how to teach them in the most effective way.
On the other hand, almost schools provide students academic knowledge and do not focus much on teaching them how to be good members of society. As school must deal with hundreds or thousands of students, teachers cannot control and ensure good society education for all their students. However, children can learn the way to treat other people at school such as their teachers or friends which is a crucial factor in society.
In conclusion, although there are some arguments in the place where children should be taught to be a good citizen in society, I strongly believe that parents have a major duty in this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, nevertheless, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01176470588 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50247090503 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.4471341024 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.25 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403036269727 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.152677809336 0.084324248473 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099621824044 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269441041668 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.073501589216 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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