The graph below shows the average monthly salary and the prices of black and white and colour TV in Japanese yen from 1953 to 1973, Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph shows the cost of both the television, average salary of the month. The cursory glance at the graph is enough to state that monthly wage kept on increasing, while the price of both the television declined continuously.
With regards to Monthly salary, it initiated in 1953 and then dramatically inclined and reached it zenith point at around 180,000 Yen in 1973. In 1963, the salary gradually escalated to about 95,000 Yen. In addition to that, it could be observed that the rise in the salary was approximately 9 time 1973.
In contrast, a sharp reduction was found in cost of Black and White TV. It embarked on 100,000 yen in 1953 and fell to around 30,000 Yen in 1975. The price of Color TV dropped to nearly 30,000 Yen in 1953, down to 70,000 Yen from 1953.
Overall, both the Black and White as well as Color TV declined during the given time period, whereas there was drastic growth in average monthly salary.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
... in 1953, down to 70,000 Yen from 1953. Overall, both the Black and White as wel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, then, well, whereas, while, in addition, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67878787879 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42186246812 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5868025926 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7777777778 112.824112599 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 22.9334400587 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 5.23603664747 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278051204076 0.215688989381 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117457511756 0.103423049105 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502739859918 0.0843802449381 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15662796184 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0258242725478 0.0819641961636 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.2329268293 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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