At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, in some nations the population of number of young adults is large than compared to number of older people. As it has both pros and cons; however, advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages.
At the outset, there are myriad of benefits of having young adults in large proportion. The prime reason behind this is that they are familiar with the technology and know how to operate it. In this technical era, technology play's consequential part in every one's life but only young adults know how to deal with it by the reason of which they play crucial role in family. For instance, if a person is having difficulty in using lap-top then they can help them which will make their work more easier and quicker. Moreover, they can also enable to solve any problems they face in their life with the help of their creative mind as well as they are more energetic than compare to older people. To cite an example, a project given to a student who do not have any collective data about that topic was finding difficulty to complete it; consequently, the student get information through internet due to his creative thinking.
On the other hand, there are some ripple consequences of having young adults in large number. The major shutdown of this situation is that they are not having enough experience in their life. In order to overcome the problem they need some support and advise from older folks, whilst sans their help they are unable to solve the woe which comes out of the box. To quote an example, a survey from waterloo university, a renowned university of Canada, depicts that the families who have older people in their house face fewer issues than having only younger people which stands as a paragon.
In conclusion, it is better to have more young adults rather than older people since it has positive outcome than negative.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 489, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77950310559 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4339763686 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537267080745 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.6402078787 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.384615385 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.38461538462 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220329941274 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0979415491104 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103710014128 0.0667982634062 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178476355879 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.155348723343 0.056905535591 273% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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