More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?
Day by day city-life becomes more popular between people who live in rural areas. While there are many opportunities in large cities there are some major drawbacks. In my opinion, governments could do much more to improve city life for the average inhabitant.
The main problem for everyone who hopes to migrate to a large city is that the cost of living is likely to be much higher than that in a town or village. Residents of cities have to pay much higher prices for education, housing, food, treatment, transport and even taxes. In extreme conditions this can lead to homelessness, homelessness is becoming more common in cities. Second issue is that urban areas tend to suffer from social problems such as higher crime and poverty rates in comparison with rural areas. There are several explanations why higher populated residential crowding produces higher crime rates. For a violent crime to occur, it takes two people to tangle. Criminals cannot kill, rob, or assault someone unless there is a “someone” to assault. In a large city, there are many potential targets of violence. Besides, people in small towns and villages have a great bonding and they know each other very well, which is quite the opposite in a city. Third issue is environmental issues (air pollution, noise) and traffic jam. Population in cities is increasing so does the number of vehicles that pollute the air. Due to that streets and public transport systems are usually overcrowded. As an outcome, city life can be unhealthy and stressful.
Nonetheless, in my opinion there are various steps that governments could take to tackle these problems. Firstly, the government should have comprehensive economical plans for controlling the prices of daily merchandises, free education and health insurance for everyone. Make job opportunities for people to handle their basic needs. Also investing money in the building of affordable or social housing is a good idea. Secondly, the state could provide some good programs to educate people, such as TV shows, radios, and short commercials and so on.
Finally, there are some solutions for the air pollution that governments could take. Politicians have the power to ban vehicles from city centers and promote the use of cleaner public transport, which would help to reduce both air pollution and traffic congestion. in Tehran, for example, in certain streets there are Traffic restrictions for drivers that helped slightly to curb traffic problem. Even it is better to allocate more budgets for researching on clean fuels to replace Fossil ones. Another option would be to develop provincial towns and rural areas, by moving industry and jobs to those regions, in order to reduce the pressure on major cities.
In conclusion, although there are some major problems in city life but governments could implement a range of measures to enhance the quality of life for all city residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, if, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, third, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2449.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 476.0 315.596192385 151% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14495798319 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67091256922 4.20363070211 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7676759544 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 176.041082164 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563025210084 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 775.8 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.4847338276 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.7037037037 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6296296296 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.7037037037 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342774245073 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0801608666309 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0845448711362 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198811734445 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912673991061 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 141.0 78.4519038076 180% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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