A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
Thank him/her for the invitation
Explain why you can not come
Ask him about other times to visit
Dear Aleesha,
I am writing to tell you that I was pleasantly surprised to receive your invitation. Unfortunately, I won’t be able to visit you during summer holidays as I’ll be extremely busy shifting to my new apartment.
Let me explain you my situation in detail. Recently, I changed my job and my new office is located far away from my current accommodation. As a result, every day I reach home exhausted and I am unable to cook or do anything else. I discussed this with my manager and he was kind enough to provide me an apartment in one of the company’s living facilities. Since, currently it is very difficult for me to move because of my hectic work routine, I decided to relocate during the summer holidays when workload will be less and I will be able to take a few days leave from work.
Could you let me know of another time when you would be free so that I can come and visit you. I think Christmas would be a great time as I would get ten days off and I believe it would be the same for you. Moreover, the weather would be great in your city and so we can go for paragliding and cliff diving.
Please let me know.
Your friend,
Noora
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 4.92783505155 244% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 964.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.34234234234 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61383941374 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581081081081 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.537023982 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.16666666667 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195608754369 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0872021977801 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0843867371147 0.0603063233224 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136725505219 0.12726935374 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0593409545254 0.0580467560999 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 8.71597938144 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 7.59969072165 91% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.