Travelling
Travelling around the world has recently become more popular. A convenient way to reserve the
accommodation and relatively low cost budget make people tempted to go overseas. Yet, there
remains some disputable contention related to the influence of international tourism. Nevertheless, I
personally intend to argue that this new hobby implies more merits instead of demerits. There are
two primary reasons for this.
First of all, it is undeniable fact that international tourism brings cultural exchange between foreigner
and indigenous. Travellers obtain universe culture and insight regarding to how people in different
countries do their daily life, such as foods, fashions, and lifestyles. By do so, people will discern with
broad perspective as to unfamiliar behavior committed through nations.
Equally importantly, rising of foreign exchange of destination country also indicates that international
tourism conform to economic growth. Foreigner contribute to the economy by means of visiting
country which has fascinating tourism program. With this economic aims, the government is
prompted to escalate its touristry program persuading foreigner plan to travel to their country.
By way of conclusion, in spite of criminal conviction committed by few tourists while visiting, I
consider that international tourism will be increasingly popular and common in the next years due to
widespread information and enthralling advertisement prepared by the country through the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Equally,
...ar behavior committed through nations. Equally importantly, rising of foreign exchange...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, while, as to, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 217.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.97235023041 5.12529762239 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1182735163 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.691244239631 0.561755894193 123% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3697242584 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0833333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 16.0 4.38176352705 365% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133523583416 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524735077834 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941333158986 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0425654256269 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0886367886582 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.05 12.4159519038 137% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.35 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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