Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e. g. at home, when travelling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, technological advancements and cutting-edge gadget creation have brought huge benefits to mankind, allowing them to work from home. But while remote work enhances certain aspects of their lives, it may be detrimental to others.
One of the biggest benefits of mobile work is that it can help reduce commuting time and costs. Work offices are usually located in the heart of the cities and the cost of having accommodation in the urban area is sometimes too exorbitant for most city dwellers to afford. In addition, when individuals live far from their workplace, not only do they have to spend too much time commuting but they also suffer from traffic congestion as well as dust and smoke from vehicles. Therefore, telework is a great way to save time and money so that people can be more flexible in managing their work-life balance.
Despite the advantages mentioned above, remote work might prove to be less efficient without discipline and responsibility. Workers might start procrastinating as the employers and peers are not around. As a result, it can lead to missed deadlines, decreased productivity, and compromised quality of work. Moreover, those individuals may suffer from isolation and a lack of collaboration among colleagues. In the long run, the lack of face-to-face interaction may make people feel lonely, negatively impacting their mental health.
In conclusion, while there are several drawbacks of working from home, the benefits are more significant. To take all the advantages of this, people should have a good sense of responsibility and self-discipline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33201581028 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08421482251 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624505928854 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3347731444 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.769230769 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204015430048 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631427153354 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397255294338 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11948860721 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0334604802328 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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