New Parents should attend parenting classes to learn how to bring up their children well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
While some argues parents must enroll parenting workshop to seek the best way to raise their child, other reckons it is unnecessary and wasting time for merely discussing theoretical point of view. I personally stand for supporting the first group and my reasons will be explained in the following paragraph.
First and foremost, parents are responsible of rising and carrying up their children in order to create a better generation in the future. Such duties are not as eases as flipping card from one side into the other. In fact, many parents, specifically those who just have their first babies, possessed less, if not no experiences of how to carry up the best for their child. Attending parenting subject should assist parents. Since, it qualified them with practical knowledge which is necessary for their junior member, such as what food to consume, the primary lesson to teach, how to deal with certain behavior, etc.
Furthermore, the development of technology and its unique features, although assist people in many aspects of their life. However, in this case, it is a double edge sword that contains beneficial and detrimental. Many parents turn to be more pragmatic in dealing with their child issue as a result of these fancy equipment. To illustrate, it is general phenomena that lots of parents will rely on their gadget to stop their child crying instead of cares and love. Hence, parents are in need of right guidance to turn the pros into cons.
In summary, it is clear that parenting workshop benefits parent that will help them decide what to do for the best of their future generation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 617, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... how to deal with certain behavior, etc. Furthermore, the development of technolo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, while, in fact, in summary, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9594095941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58270424988 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623616236162 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9374114471 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277410415312 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962678852153 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0652607918459 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167301461013 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0526846510308 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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