Your company is going to give a special training course for staff. Your manager has asked you to find out if the local conference centre has the right facilities to hold this course.
Write a letter to the manager of the conference centre. In your letter:
Give details about the course
Describe what equipment you will need for the course
Ask some further questions about the facilities at the conference centre
Dear Sir,
My name is Vishal Bhat, from Americana Food Company. I am writing this letter with regards to information about pathogen testing course facility. My organization is looking for external training to our staff of microbiology, on method of detection and isolation of pathogenic bacteria from food samples. Therefore, I want to know if you can give this training at your center to 8 candidates.
Mainly the equipment required will be laminar air flow for screening and isolation of bacteria, autoclave for sterilization purpose, which is a mandatory guidelines for any microbiological testing method. Microscope for identification of microorganisms. There are many more small equipment’s required for that I am attaching list at the back of the letter.
Furthermore, I have some questions about the facility, such as what quality of water you are using for testing, air filtration unit for the lab and what certification do you have from government body. Finally, availability of power point projector for presentation in lecture hall.
I would be grateful if you could reply at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, My name is Vishal Bhat, from Americana F...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...raining at your center to 8 candidates. Mainly the equipment required will be la...
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Line 5, column 155, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'guideline'?
Suggestion: guideline
...ilization purpose, which is a mandatory guidelines for any microbiological testing method....
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Line 9, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...uld reply at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Vishal Bhat
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...st convenience. Yours faithfully, Vishal Bhat
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, look, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 32.9175257732 55% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 3.85567010309 363% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 180.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.49444444444 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.33293979158 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.7 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7971532791 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.9090909091 76.5299724578 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3636363636 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19297322644 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752097392418 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509545689907 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103793522822 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0411202148032 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 8.37731958763 150% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 70.7449484536 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 8.71597938144 164% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 7.59969072165 126% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 41.2886597938 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.