Some people think that money is one of the most essential factors in promoting happiness.
Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness.
in recent years hapiness is a big gift which is send to people from god. if you are happy, you should be thankful, becuase nothing is important than happiness. Hence this issue has lots of factor which are affected on happiness. in this manuscribed we want to talk about happiness and all of its reason.
As it is mentioned above, happiness has different reason. but some group of people think that the only reason for happiness is money. Its a worst idea because in each person the reason is different and its strongly affected by personality. May be you are rich but every day you feel sad, becuase you affraid you lose your money, some body kill you becuase of your money, every body like you becuase you are rich, etc. so if you are rich, you should find a way to help you be happy.
On the other hand, you see a lot of people who are happy but they are not rich. they find themself and then find a way which is make them saticfy. some people are happy by doing excersice, others like to be in society and make conversation with others, some body like read novels and be alone and think about himself or herself. There for every body has different taste and lifestyle.
in conclusion, all people who are happy, are not rich, so we should find a way that is comfortable for us and enjoy our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, so, then, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1072.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41152263374 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25195773823 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 176.041082164 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510288065844 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9170696442 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.5714285714 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3571428571 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288024758166 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0962293550737 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0852875750081 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157008988807 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671144641644 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 12.4159519038 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.43 8.58950901804 75% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 78.4519038076 38% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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