Impact of televisions shows on society.
The importance of impact of televisions shows on society. which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. the substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. in my opinion the former latter proposition appears to be more rational. this essay will further elaborate my view for favoring the positive negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
the are myriad of reasons which will further elaborate this argument but the most preponderant one steams from the fact that the televisions are very important
Nowdays consequently but some people not use t.v because they think not bad with which not use TV rightly another pivotal aspect of this trend is that any women very watch a televisions and with which very bad effect on women. needless to say all these merits stand in a good bad stead.
elaborating my viewpoint there are some more merits demerits but one of the crucial effect is that the some people very watched TV besides some people not like televisions. hence it is apparent why are against in favor of this trend.
according to the argument aforementioned above one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits drawbacks of impact of television shows on society are indeed too great dire to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, hence, so, thus, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 20.9802955665 91% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 1207.87684729 97% => OK
No of words: 234.0 242.827586207 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99145299145 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65796850094 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576923076923 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 370.8 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.5024630542 112% => OK
Sentence length SD: 95.7313428298 50.4703680194 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.8 104.977214359 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4 20.9669160288 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.25397266985 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.33497536946 356% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212939946637 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125229378774 0.0925447433944 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.240688280233 0.071462118173 337% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112917908373 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0984703706994 0.0609392437508 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 12.6369458128 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 53.1260098522 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 11.5310837438 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.32886699507 104% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 55.0591133005 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.3980295567 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.