The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
In today's Contemporary and fast paced world, each country's major cities play a very important role in
deciding the economic, social as well as political status of a country. The major cities reflect upon the
overall development and provide a bird's view of that country. however, this is an unfair generalization
made by the author that looking into the major cities will give us all the important characteristics of a
society. Let’s further look into this.
For decades, a country has been divided into two fragments. Firstly, the major cities where
Urbanization and development have taken at a faster pace. Secondly the towns and rural areas of the
country which provide a closer look into the cultural heritage.
The major cities have helped in establishing international standards and maintaining the
foreign relations. Every major city of any country will always have the best amenities and
and facilities be it New delhi in india, paris in france or Beijing in China.
however these cities may provide some insight into the culture and traditions of
that country ,their socioeconomic status and the way their society functions but
will not give a holistic picture. Due to Commercialization and the growing needs of each city to
compete with each other in the race of being the best, they somewhat are not capable of
capturing the true essence of their society and the bucolic beauty of that nation.
For instance, to know about the cultural and traditional background of india, looking
into their major cities will only provide an overview. Metropolitan cities like delhi,
Bangalore etc have very less to offer in terms of india's history
of culture and traditions. To truly understand their society and background,
it is necessary to visit the countryside or further explore some other cities
to learn about their culture, heritage and past.
Another popular example is paris in france. paris is no doubt the fashion hub of the country
and has some widely popular tourist attractions but looking alone into paris would not give
enough information about entire france like their major contribution in
Cheese production, wine and vineyards, perfumes etc. For that it is necessary to look
into the small villages and towns and not just the major cities.
major cities will always provide information and various important characteristics of a
society. however, one can truly know about a country's culture and society by studying
the smaller cities and towns along with the major cities for a more accurate knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, may, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, no doubt, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 26.0 6.8 382% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 20.0 5.60731707317 357% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 33.7804878049 163% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.97073170732 277% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2205.0 965.302439024 228% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 412.0 196.424390244 210% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35194174757 4.92477711251 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 3.73543355544 121% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74607578689 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 106.607317073 193% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 680.4 283.868780488 240% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 8.94146341463 212% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9144989086 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.052631579 112.824112599 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6842105263 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.42105263158 5.23603664747 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 30.0 3.83414634146 782% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 21.0 1.69756097561 1237% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 3.70975609756 243% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0262958112168 0.215688989381 12% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0104573547023 0.103423049105 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.015868353823 0.0843802449381 19% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.00854721577181 0.15604864568 5% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178583275885 0.0819641961636 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.2329268293 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 61.2550243902 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.3012195122 123% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 40.7170731707 243% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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