The two pie charts below show some employment patterns in Great Britain in 1992.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two pie charts represents great britain's employment in 1992 by distributing into sex and occupation.
males are working in managerial and professional sector with greatest amount which is 36% of the chart. whereas, 31% of chart of the females are likely doing employment in clerical and related sector. Both genders are mostly dislike to do work in general laborers with 2% in male and 1% in female.
In clerical sector females are more inclined with 31% of total but males are only with the 6%. whereas, less female are interest to do employment in craft sector(3%) but more male are likely to do work in the same. At a same time male and female are having quietly similar interest in other manual work with 26% and 27% respectively.
There is also other non-manual sector where males are having 6% of occupation and females are having 9% of occupation.
Both pie charts are mostly different than others which represents female's and male's interest in employment pattern in britain 1992.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Males
...tributing into sex and occupation. males are working in managerial and professio...
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Line 4, column 57, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'with the greatest'.
Suggestion: with the greatest
...g in managerial and professional sector with greatest amount which is 36% of the chart. where...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...atest amount which is 36% of the chart. whereas, 31% of chart of the females are likely...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disliked'.
Suggestion: disliked
...related sector. Both genders are mostly dislike to do work in general laborers with 2% ...
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Line 4, column 226, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'dislike doing'.
Suggestion: dislike doing
...related sector. Both genders are mostly dislike to do work in general laborers with 2% in mal...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Whereas
...f total but males are only with the 6%. whereas, less female are interest to do employm...
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Line 11, column 38, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
... Both pie charts are mostly different than others which represents females and mal...
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Line 11, column 133, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in employment pattern in britain 1992.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, whereas, in general
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 844.0 965.302439024 87% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96470588235 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57520785602 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 261.0 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 12.0625939515 43.030603864 28% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 93.7777777778 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8888888889 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 5.23603664747 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131440375454 0.215688989381 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071181086613 0.103423049105 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0926401947276 0.0843802449381 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113709164693 0.15604864568 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103411804284 0.0819641961636 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.2329268293 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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