The following chart shows average carbon dioxide emissions, 1967 - 2007Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The following chart shows average carbon dioxide emissions, 1967 - 2007

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

<p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 17.6px;"> </span>The provided line chart shows key data on the measurements of how much carbon dioxide was released by an individual in each of the four ranking countries during the five periods: 1967, 1977, 1987, 1997 and 2007. </p><p class="MsoNormal"><span style="font-size: 17.6px;"> </span>Overall, there were two trends to be derived from the chart, the proportions of CO2emission for Italy and Portugal witnessed considerable increases, whilst, those of the other two countries, especially Sweden’s tended to significantly diminish.</p><p class="MsoNormal"> As can be seen from the chart, in 1967, the UK has a total figure for the amount of CO2 of over 10 tonnes, which took the first position. This was followed by Sweden’s, with the figure being comparatively lower, at nearly 9 metric tonnes. The quantity of CO2 emissions per person in Italy came the third, at over 4 tonnes. Approximately 2 tonnes CO2 were produced by Portugal’s citizens.</p><p class="MsoNormal">&nbsp; According to the chart, in 2007, the quantity of CO2 emissions in the UK went down to more than 8 tonnes per person. Meanwhile, there was a remarkable drop to less than 6 tonnes in Italy. Converely, an significant increase was recorded inPortugal, with the former figure (data in 1967) much less than the latter one (2007). Similarly, Italy saw a rapid increase to about nearly 8 tonnes.</p>

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, similarly, so, third, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 965.302439024 132% => OK
No of words: 220.0 196.424390244 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.80909090909 4.92477711251 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.08720644573 2.65546596893 192% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 106.607317073 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.547539520022 115% => OK
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 147.213280651 43.030603864 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.75 112.824112599 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 22.9334400587 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0605388401917 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0256449411092 0.103423049105 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0278592586109 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0605388401917 0.15604864568 39% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.7 13.2329268293 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 61.2550243902 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.71 11.4140731707 146% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 11.4329268293 280% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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