Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Some people assume that settling in an overseas country with different language will bring those emigrants into some persistent issues. From my perspective, I totally concur with this statement because those problems are inevitable which almost all of the foreigners have to undergo when living abroad.
Culture shock and language barrier are always the prevalent problems of all time. Migrating to other countries, especially different continents will make people confused at first, so they have to learn to acclimatize new climate, adapt new environment and adopt new culture. For example, Asian people are used to eating with chopsticks or even with their hands, then when they move to Western countries, they have to get used to eating with fork and knife. Thus, it will make them change their habits and culture, sometimes it will lead those people to isolate themselves because they cannot adopt more.
Another issue bringing negative effect to the emigrants is finding the job which is a down-to-earth problem those people have to face. As far as what I have known, native employers have a tendency to hire people with the same nationality as them which means that the exotic people have less chance when applying for the job. Besides, those employers are believed to take advantage of their labours by paying less than what those workers deserve to have. Therefore, the overseas people will be discouraged to make ends meet because of being served unequally and as a result, they will lose their incentive and become the social issues.
All in all, dwelling in foreign countries will bring many opportunities but it still have some drawbacks. Hence, comprehending and perceiving those advantages will help people to prepare conscientiously before making their mind to live abroad.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, so, still, then, therefore, thus, well, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21107266436 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60199790061 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3503081778 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.5 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0833333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131419298849 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547859783121 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414629462281 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094289963451 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383975793598 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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