Some people say that in past knowledge was store in the box but now people store knowledge on the internet.Is it a positive and negative change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In this contemporary era masses are approaching to save valuable information and data online as compared to past. Change is the law of nature and every change brings with some pros and cons .I firmly contended, the above change is the requirement of this digital world. Both the views will be discussed in the upcoming paragraphs with my own perspective.
To begin with, storing knowledge over digital gadgets is helpful for easy access at anytime and it's available in more right conditions. To illustrate, a student can save his projects and study materials on laptop .And read it any time ,any where no need to carry a bundle of books . secondly ,this new change. Reduce the usage of paper work to minimal trees use.
Apart from that , it has also umpteen drawbacks. Firstly , these days people are becoming more dependent on technology . sometime failure of technology results all stored data lost within minutes. Moreover,it is an expensive change because to keep data in Digital way having hitech gadgets are inevitable.To exemplify, laptops are the most preferable medium of storing information and are minimum starting purchasing price is RS.20,000.
To conclude, this hi -tech modification is costly but it's diverse advantages like stored for long time period , easy access outweigh it's disadvantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, apart from, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 211.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25592417062 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81237330152 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.720379146919 0.561755894193 128% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 57.7335835252 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4166666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5833333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135067136109 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426997595237 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0338483840162 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679836943127 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0151355383185 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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