The surest indicator of a great nation is represented not by the achievements of its rulers, artists, or
scientists, but by the general welfare of its people.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your
reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which
the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
According to the statement, the most effective measure a nation's greatness may not be capured through the breaktrough
or the actions of its stakeholders or scientists, yet it views people's welfare as a strong indicator to gauge a nation's
greatness. In general, economic theories suggest that the basic indicator which translates the general level of economic
welfare and living standards in a country is the Gross Domestic Product (GDP) per capita. Thus, general welfare of people
in a nation is evidently the best way to represent the greatness of a nation.
A nation is primarily great through how it values and promotes its people's economic success and welfare gain. The
elements of economic success and welfare, whihc are the core components of the GDP per capita, demonstrate the general
level of wealth and economic prosperity accumulated in a nation on average per habitant. The World Bank and numerous
other international institutions as well as economists in academia postit the GDP per capita as a strong indicator of
the general level of people's welfare and living standards in a nation, where the GDP itslelf is accepted as the
fundamental indicator of a country's greatness in term of economic performance.
Notwithstanding, the stakeholders, leaders, artists, entrepreneurs, and scientists, definitely play a crucial rule in
acheiving the economic success, which leads to economic welfare and income distribution. The rule of those key actors
is vital in the sens that it enables the developement of innovation and technology, which are the vital incredients for
the today's technology driven economies. Albeit at macroeconomic level it is very difficult to generaly and strongly
credit those actors' remarquable breakthrough for the greatness of a whole nation.
Indeed, a nation may just be great essentially because it has substential natural resource endowment and make good use of them by valuing human developement, education, good healthcare, and social services. Nations such as Dubai, Emirat Arab United, and Quatar, did not necessarily rely on the work of their artists or scientists before acheivement their indisputable level of greatness as nations. Some of those nations, such as Quatar and Dubai for instance, derived an incredible benefit from their natural resource endowment in such a way that has allowed them to invest part of their revenues in stocks, real estates, businesses, and sport in Europe, Australia, and other countries, expanding their strategic and economic influence accross the globe.
Although relying on the acheivements of great rulers, artists, and scientists may offer a critical competetitive advantage,
this does not represent a necessary condition for a nation to be great. The peformance of the whole economy viewed through macroeconomic aggregates (such as GDP per capita) are the most important indicators to gauge a nation's greatness, espacially because they capure the downstream effects and contributions of all the components of the economy (such as the rulers, artiists, and scientists).
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, thus, well, for instance, in general, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 14.8657303371 168% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 58.6224719101 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2632.0 2235.4752809 118% => OK
No of words: 474.0 442.535393258 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.55274261603 5.05705443957 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.66599839874 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11555021402 2.79657885939 111% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497890295359 0.4932671777 101% => OK
syllable_count: 810.9 704.065955056 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 10.0 4.99550561798 200% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 9.0 1.77640449438 507% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.2370786517 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 23.0359550562 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.192226642 60.3974514979 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 188.0 118.986275619 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8571428571 23.4991977007 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 5.21951772744 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 4.97078651685 382% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 7.80617977528 218% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204960137968 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836238323199 0.0831039109588 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545956672537 0.0758088955206 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736435095375 0.150359130593 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437066917426 0.0667264976115 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.6 14.1392134831 153% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 48.8420337079 60% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.92365168539 164% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 12.1743820225 142% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.1639044944 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.24 8.38706741573 122% => OK
difficult_words: 149.0 100.480337079 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 11.2143820225 136% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.