The natural resources such as oil, forests and fresh water are being consumed at an alarming rate. What problems does it cause? How can we solve these problems?
Over the past few years, the earth has been witnessing an incessant reduction in its natural resources. Owing to this , it is debatable that the consumption of resources like oil, water and forests are being wasted due to personal requirements. Causes and possible solutions to this situation are discussed in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are ample causes why natural resources are being consumed at an alarming rate. The predominant cause is its create pollution. To be more precise, most of the pollution are happening by individuals or companies. What is more, fuel is used in vehicles, industries and homes like people he cars and bikes as a purpose of moving from one place to another and factories also released their waste materials or dirty fuels either in air or in rivers. Another reason is deforestation. It means, trees are cut because of constructing homes or industries through people. Moreover, its directly affect on many flora and fauna because they not only lost their shelters but also lost their food.
However, there are plenty of ways in which this problem could be solved. Initially, if possible then people should try to use public transportation instead of using their own vehicle. In addition, government should take some harsh actions against those companies who spread more pollution to lessen the quality of air and water . Lastly, afforestation should be augmented with the help of humans efforts. For instance, every person plants a tree and nurtures it for either few months or few years then the day is not far when we shall have greenery all over. Hence, this kind of problem could be solved by people or authorities.
To recapitulate, we must remember that the nature is not our property, it is a heritage that we must preserve for the next generation. Although natural resources has been reducing in the form of deforestation, pollution and so on, strict laws or planting a trees could be solved this issue with the help of people as well as governments.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...or industries through people. Moreover, its directly affect on many flora and fauna...
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Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... through people. Moreover, its directly affect on many flora and fauna because they not o...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun flora seems to be countable; consider using: 'many florae', 'many floras'.
Suggestion: many florae; many floras
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...n to lessen the quality of air and water . Lastly, afforestation should be augment...
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Suggestion: a tree; trees
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, lastly, moreover, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, kind of, as well as, to begin with, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 13.1623246493 182% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00296735905 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77092444747 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608308605341 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.7719800691 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6666666667 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7222222222 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235158364725 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677678590785 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826782886854 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128972074671 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0164866178264 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.