Some people think that the best way to learn is from newspaper. Others think that the best way to learn is through media.
In this world everything changed, and technology took a big part from our lives, especially in learning. Learning or reading from book, newspaper for some people is still the best way, others think that the best way to learn is through media and stay up to date.
Number of people prefer to learn from papers and believe that they can benefit from it more. First, studying from magazines or books is much easier for reader, to concentrate on what is the topic, he/she can highlight the points directly. Second, to learn from newspaper, encourages the person to read more and improve his language, by collecting new vocab, information and go deeply in details. For example, when I was at school, our English teacher used to bring us books, articles, to learn from, expand our knowledge and language.
On the other hand, technology is overtaking publish, through internet or television, that’s why several societies think that media is the best way to learn from. First, using the internet has a wild range of information, that help humans to search and find any data they want quickly, without difficulties. Second, watching on TV or any video online, will assist the viewer to learn new things like, hand craft work, new languages, all these will make it easy and fast to study. For example, a psychology doctor released a DVD name” Children Can Read”, to help kids to talk their first word and learn new language.
As a conclusion, there is two type of people, some prefer to learn from newspaper, others through media. From my side, I believe that both procedures will aid us to learn, improve our knowledge and discover new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9359430605 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56695895006 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608540925267 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.3447068767 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.583333333 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445788545096 0.244688304435 182% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17087218367 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.203112861149 0.0667982634062 304% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.296608322123 0.151304729494 196% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.14870250198 0.056905535591 261% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.