Nowadays, children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sport. What are the reasons for this? It is a positive or negative development.
Nowadays, people are live in stressful life so they are remove all stress from mind by playing computer games and outdoor games. but some children and youngsters are spend more time for it so today i am discuss about this problem's reason and its negative effects.
In present time, population are increase day by day for that requires more land for build a houses and business offices so shortage of land for playground. That’s reason children are play video games. Second intention that money bait, all the parents are running for money so they do not spend time for children. Now all software companies are making high-resolution games, funny characters, give new challenging mission, good graphics, better quality this things attract the children.so this intention children are always played with computer and mobile game.
This is negative development like they can't concentrate in study because of that spoiled their career. if the children are playing outside, it helps them to catch different features like leadership skills, team spirit and many more. Major impact on their brain so they can't communicate between parent and relatives. All the day they are thinking about games and its mission. Other great impact on health is eyes.it do fewer works properly.
In conclusion, scarcity of land as well as busy schedule of parents are pivotal reasons that modern generation spend most of their time playing virtual games. Furthermore, it is recommends that government should take initiatives to encourage children to play outdoor sports.
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| 2019-09-07 | vikas patel | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, second, so, well, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1318.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31451612903 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61347253356 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 392.4 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4250571694 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.384615385 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0769230769 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313811332319 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106343644243 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695151911632 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196079249699 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0776123183802 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.