children have more freedom than in the past.Is this a positive or a negative development.
In these rapidly advancing age of technology children’s have acquired more freedom than ever.There are many reasons responsible for these technology,social media and parents expectations are few of the main ones. These freedom affects children in both positive and negative way. However, I think there are more positive sides to it.
Firstly, the main positive aspect of these freedom is the kind of exposure they get at a very young age. Today, because of these freedom many children are able to pursue the career of their own interest in any of the respective fields. It is only because of the independence of choice that we see them succeeding in areas which were not considered significant before. Also the number of students travelling to other countries at young age has increased. These not only helps them academic wise, but it leads to the exchange of culture between students creating an environment of friendliness.
Other than these,being free helps helps the children acquire certain important skills like leadership and decision making. These would not be possible if they are always under the shadow of their parents or gaurdians. Freedom helps in making them more hard working and exuberant.
On the other hand too much freedom can have negative effects also. Children are easy to manipulate and taking advantage of these many vicious activities are conducted with their help. Moreover, excess freedom also breaks the children’s bond with his near and dear. They spent a lot of time enjoying their freedom away from their loved ones.
Finally, I would like to conclude that freedom for children have both positive and negative effects,but the pros outweigh the cons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, i think, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21897810219 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7589333924 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580291970803 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.954466271 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.375 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.125 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.125 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.291609293581 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102370217196 0.084324248473 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0870386611393 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18504786446 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0905619553357 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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