Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Our world has made great strides in every field because of the development of novel technologies.
The statement that assumes that technology unnecessarily complicates our lives is a gross oversimplification and an injustice to all the technological marvels in the recent centuries which has made the world an infinitely better place to live .
Let us simply consider an example of how technology has immensely impacted us in a usual day of our lives.The cars and other public modes of transport we use to commute to and from work have become so ubiquitous, that we just cannot imagine spending a significant amount of time having to walk to work. Technology has aided hospitals and emergency response teams to rescue people in grave danger in a matter of few seconds, which is paramount when it comes to life and death.
Almost century back, one would have to scour through several books in various libraries to conduct research in any field of study in great detail. Not to mention, the additional care and effort required to maintain those books which would be passed around to so many people and would be at the mercy of the reader. With the advent of the internet, technology has simplified the process of being exposed to an abyss of information at any instant. If anything, technology has strongly contributed to the conservation and spread of knowledge.
There was a time when scientists performed highly complex and involved calculations manually and engineers drew mechanical or electrical drawings by hand. Such calculations and drawings would span several pages with little room to make mistakes. Technology has led to development of several kinds of simulation software aiding scientists and engineers to perform calculations and modeling in a short span of time
As humans, we are an inquisitive species and if there is one thing which sets us apart from all the other animals in this planet, is our creativity and powerful intellectual prowess. It would be a travesty to let our highly developed brains be occupied with mundane tasks which can be readily automated or even eliminated because of technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... and other public modes of transport we use to commute to and from work have become...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 14.8657303371 114% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 33.0505617978 54% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 58.6224719101 96% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1796.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 350.0 442.535393258 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13142857143 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95100314715 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 215.323595506 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574285714286 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 704.065955056 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 23.0359550562 126% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 79.8601207668 60.3974514979 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.666666667 118.986275619 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1666666667 23.4991977007 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.58333333333 5.21951772744 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123248067844 0.243740707755 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0435810760793 0.0831039109588 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0336928847253 0.0758088955206 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654442909433 0.150359130593 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366801522093 0.0667264976115 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.3 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 48.8420337079 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.1639044944 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.38706741573 114% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 100.480337079 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 11.8971910112 177% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 11.2143820225 121% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.